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Today's thoughts by ~Runeman02:iconRuneman02:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Spoken Word


You don't need me,
You don't love me,
You never cared, never knew

I fucked it up
ruined everything
it's all my fault

You said it yourself,
I'm not good enough!

You took him...
Then laughed at me...

So now i grind myself into my bloody ground
©2006-2008 ~Runeman02
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~Gonahkar:iconGonahkar: Jan 30, 2006, 8:48:42 AM
OH..this is powerful..:(
it's sad...
this poem touched me deep!

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Men want to be a Women's First Love
Women want to be Man's last Romance
:rose: :heart: :rose:

God created man first
because you always create a roughdraft
before a masterpeice
~Runeman02:iconRuneman02: Jan 30, 2006, 11:02:45 AM
really? I just kinda made it up as i went and it is my first time writing to express myself.. ._.

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lol
~Gonahkar:iconGonahkar: Jan 30, 2006, 2:00:10 PM
it's really good. you should continue writing

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Men want to be a Women's First Love
Women want to be Man's last Romance
:rose: :heart: :rose:

God created man first
because you always create a roughdraft
before a masterpeice
~waterdragon11:iconwaterdragon11: Jan 30, 2006, 2:38:23 PM
This is the first time I've ever seen you write anything, Noah! Very good! ^_^

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Jen: What's this?
Me: You can name your character. Just leave it as Squall, it's what it's supposed to be in the game.
Jen: *presses buttons*
Me: ...Squibbly?
~Runeman02:iconRuneman02: Jan 30, 2006, 2:56:44 PM
.... i thought you hated me ._.

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lol
~chaotic-spaz:iconchaotic-spaz: Jan 30, 2006, 5:24:31 PM
noah...you know that's not how I feel...

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:skull: :ahoy: -Pirates- are {frickin} sweet :ahoy: :rose:
~waterdragon11:iconwaterdragon11: Jan 30, 2006, 5:31:33 PM
I don't really like some of the things you've said, but you're so depressed. I love everyone and it would just murder me if you killed yourself or something, so I have to watch out for you.

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Jen: What's this?
Me: You can name your character. Just leave it as Squall, it's what it's supposed to be in the game.
Jen: *presses buttons*
Me: ...Squibbly?
~smexygothone:iconsmexygothone: Jan 31, 2006, 12:50:32 PM
OMG! Noah u know i love u!!
:hug: :hug: :smooch: :smooch: :hug: :hug:
pleaz don't get sad like that

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Beth is only the begining ^-^
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